Fun run
we were doing Fun run Last Friday. People were cheering As The puriri started off. Some of their parents were here. I
wasn’t scared. When it was the year 4’s turn. We ran like the wind. I almost came third place but I was so tired. So I came 7th place. It was fun next time will try my very best.
Talofa Lava Ifalame,
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I wonder what learning tool you used
Maybe next time you could tell the reader what tool you did it out of and what the propose of this activity is.
Well done
Talofa lava, my name is Gargee and I am a student in Setoga class at Hay Park School. I really like how you tried your best but you were tired. It made me think of when I did cross country at school but I was exhausted. Have you thought about telling us what fun run is and what you have to do. If you would like to see my learning, please visit My Blog
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